This is a really clever idea. Visually it looks just like a Did You Know Gaming video, the dialogue is pretty funny, and the included animation is a nice touch. I can see this being a great series if you keep at it. Are you considering using guest narrators in the future? If so I'll just leave my application here..
Thank you! So far there are 6 episodes. I am considering guest voices too.
Pretty accurate, more or less.
Did you get the real voice actor to do Squidward? It was spot on ;)
Animation and art style was great, the backgrounds were fantastic. The jokes had good timing and were pulled off in good rhythm. And overall it felt packaged in a good running time. If this doesn't win some kind of award then I will be disappointed. Can't wait to see what you come out with next!
Thanks for the biased review!
Wow, simply stunning. It's obvious to me, and I'm sure to any other right thinking individual, that after watching this single flash, you 4 clocks are the future of the Clock Crew. There isn't a doubt in my mind.
Brilliant and thought provoking writing, conservative yet clean animation and art, and of course it contains that old Clock Crew charm that started with B. You had it all, and you represented the Clock Crew perfectly.
Congratulations gentlemen, you've made SBC proud.
Great animation, funny story, and the characters are great.
I love your art style and the writing is funny too. The only thing that I can think to tell you for advice is maybe to get some voice actors. The voices used were fine, but you can always use more. I loved the fact that they tried the blood on an NES game and Mr. Bucket :P
BIG PROBLEM: You need to stop the audio clip of the two dolls attacking the giraffe, it continues out throughout the entire flash and kind of ruins it. Other than that, it was perfect.
I realized that as soon as I published it. I didn't notice because it never did that while I was making it or when I exported in other formats. I fixed it as quick as I could, but not before fifty people saw it. I'm really embarrassed about this, and I'm very sorry.
I love this style of animation, and I know that it takes a hell of a lot of work to do even when it isn't completely detailed. The fact that there is no nose or mouth or anything is fine if that is just how you are trying to portray the character. And the grey skin keeps it from looking too realistic, while still keeping a human like profile.
This was obviously just a test, but I would like to see you do more with this style, and maybe pull off a full length flash cartoon.
Art was simple but nice looking, the voice acting was good, and I loved the sarcastic humor. I sometimes stumble upon crappy fanfics like this and enjoy reading them just for how absurd they are. The contradictions and plot holes are probably the funniest part of this. (They went back where they first met before leaving? :P)
I'd definitely encourage you to make more of these, if you can find another story ridiculous enough but still usable, haha.
This is wonderful Lobster, I simply love the mixture of a song and a story, and the speaking parts are excellent. Definitely fresh sounding, I find this more addicting than the Manwhore songs and was glad to see it wasn't just another one of those.
You've definitely created some memorable characters here, and I always love seeing family members of main characters. All the different angles and facial expressions are very nice looking. Musically, I'd love to download and listen to the audio to this, so I guess I will :P The fact that this is a loop makes it that much more excellent.
But what completes this for me is Gooseman, he's always been my favorite character of yours and the drunk sounding-pseudo-autotuning mixed with the "Zzzoooohh" noise was the finisher for me.
Anyways, this is still on repeat as I write this, so I'll finish with saying tokeep up the great animations!
Great Destiny Flash
I have to disagree slightly with a previous reviewer on a couple of things. First off, I don't think that this flash was lacking at all in the funny department. Sure the first one had more memerable quotes. But I like the subtlety in this one, it fits with the main character's personality.
I was curious to why the other reviewer questioned Great Destiny Man's personality and actions, when he hasn't even fully developed yet. I love his nonchalant way of dealing with everything. [IE- "Spleens huh?] And his fantastic way of making every sentence sound grand and heroic. I also enjoyed the new characters was especially happy to see Gendo make it to the end as GDM's apprentice. I hope to see more of his adventures soon!
As for the animation and voice acting, there is nothing much to say, but keep up the excellent work!
[PS- Was that a FMA reference I saw there near the end?]
the spleen knight character was supposed to have this oozy black oil substance for a body, but i cut that out at the end because id spent a week too long on the film, but i didnt count on that making the character so similar to the FMA character, if i had thought of that i would have added the body.
When I saw the title I immediately thought of the scene from Courage the Cowardly dog and it was awesome to see that it was. I have no idea who Clam is, but this was funny none the less.
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